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Old April 15th, 2008, 02:10 AM   #1
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Journal of Survivor Jack
Date:January,1,2023

When I listened to all the screaming of people and when all I heard was just moaning of the demons.I suddenly knew that this was the nightmare I have long awaited for and now it is time to destroy it.I looked out my window and just saw rows and rows of the Dead and I just took out my fully loaded shotgun and said the line Duke Nukem used to say"Eat Shit and Die."Then I bursted open the door and ran to my car as fast as I can then started the engine,and then I began my journey of survival.Soon I suddenly found a camp and all that was in it were 3 survivors of the Apocalypse,they looked at me as if I were a zombie and it was the look of hope.

I asked one of the survivors what happened and replied"Hell has broken loose man,and we are running low on supplies so don't expect alot of food and water."Then I realized how it must have been for these people to survive with scarce food and water.Then suddenly I felt a draft around my back and looked with fear as I just had 1 shell in my shotgun,"Now I really need ammo."I muttered to myself.Man was this really Hell I have 1 shell in my weapon and I don't have any backup weapons.Soon I heard the Dead coming and told everyone to leave.

When I was told that everyone was heading to a Mall to refill on Ammunition and supplies,I had no choice but just gulped and headed with them into the starry night.Then when we saw a house with bodies and ammo littered around one of my comrades yells"I think we've hit the jackpot!"When we refilled on the ammunition I was discouraged because there was no shotgun ammo and soon continued with my comrades.Then soon we were ambushed by zombies and one of my comrades was in trouble and I aimed my weapon to my sight and pulled the trigger,and waited for the screaming of pain from my own ally then I woke up.I realized it was all a dream and I looked at my street and saw people walking,talking,and laughing.Then I lay back in my bed and just muttered"Hell will break loose one time.":zombie27
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Old April 15th, 2008, 04:04 AM   #2
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Old April 15th, 2008, 04:44 AM   #3
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Leroy; ever thought of saying something other than "Nice"?

Cool story, if not a bit short.


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Old April 15th, 2008, 05:47 AM   #4
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Old April 15th, 2008, 09:54 AM   #5
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Not bad, I liked your writing style, though it could use a bit of proof reading - and yeah, it was a tad short.
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Old April 15th, 2008, 04:06 PM   #6
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Leroy; ever thought of saying something other than "Nice"?
Agreed... lol :P
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Old April 16th, 2008, 02:17 AM   #7
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Yeah I could use a bit more words in it and I feel like I'm in Heaven,shooting zombies,smoking a cigarrete,and watch as those damn festers go through some cow manure
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