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TheDark12 · April 30th, 2008, 09:12 AM

Not bad. Only thing I'd suggest is that you make sure you put a new line for each new speaker (space it out a bit), to make it easier to read. Also, I'm iffy on the tense, but to each his own.

April 30th, 2008, 09:12 AM	#8
TheDark12 TheDark12 is Zombie fodder On the way to greater things Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 12	Not bad. Only thing I'd suggest is that you make sure you put a new line for each new speaker (space it out a bit), to make it easier to read. Also, I'm iffy on the tense, but to each his own.