Hey, I thought the story was good, but the writing could use some improvement in places. Read below to find out how/where.
I mean absolutely no offense by this statement but, is English your first language? I ask this because there are a lot of spelling and gammatical mistakes that could be improved upon. And your character's name is Enrico...
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This site might help a bit with your tense:
Verb Tense Consistency
Make sure when you are writing fiction to keep your tense consistent!
And here is a list that helped me with common writing errors:
Fiction Factor - Common Writing Mistakes
You asked for the critique and complained that no one gave it, so I'm only offering this as help.
The story has great potential, but make sure you proof read it and also get someone else to proof read it for you.
I only really read the first part because I don't have that much time, though that's not to say that you should cut it down. Just improve on it. I'll read more later when I've got more time.